ARMSTRONG, olivier

[olivier armstrong]

( olivier mira armstrong )

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the real story

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( please state your name and who you're here with )[/color][/font]

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( so how old are you and when's your birthday? )[/color][/font]

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( where were you born and where do you live now? )[/color][/font]

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( what about your family, do you have any? )[/color][/font]

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( any other important people in your life? )[/color][/font]

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( now on to the stuff about you. what do you look like? )[/color][/font]

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( any special talents or crazy abilities we should know about? )[/color][/font]

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( what do you love? )[/color][/font]

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( what do you despise? )[/color][/font]

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( what are some of your goals? )[/color][/font]

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( tell us a bit about your personality? )[/color][/font]

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( tell us a bit about your history now )[/color][/font]

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( finally, a bit about the player now )[/color][/font]

[/b] lucy
ideal contact method: pm mee
other characters played: winry (though there's more coming soon!)
how you found us: i forget... another site >.<
roleplay sample:
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[riza hawkeye]

YOUR APPLICATION IS...

ACCEPTED

OLIVIER ARMSTRONG , please fill out the
necessary claims and join in to determine
the shape of this country.



I will definitely say you have Olivier's personality down quite nicely! Through the first person applications, it really shows an understanding of who you're aiming to play. My concern is that some of the finer interactions and relations were left out, as well as the dislikes a little too simplistic. I'm not worried about edits, just make sure you keep in mind her past/relations with Mustang, for instance, or the Curtis family. Other than that, you're completely good to go! Hope you have lots of fun with her!